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Rabbits in a Medow by ~DSHammoulton88:iconDSHammoulton88:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Illustration > Conceptual

©2008 ~DSHammoulton88
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Submitted: May 1
File Size: 1.8 MB
Image Size: 61.9 KB
Resolution: 600×450
Comments: 21
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Make: Canon
Model: Canon PowerShot A560
Shutter Speed: 1/60 second
F Number: F/2.6
Focal Length: 6 mm
ISO Speed: 80
Date Picture Taken: May 1, 2008, 11:15:18 PM

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Not finished at all. It needs more, suggestions needed!
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=LoverZero:iconLoverZero: May 1, 2008, 10:35:41 PM
This is so awesome. I wish I could draw like that.
Some texture with the big empty spot of grass would help the drawing a bit, but thats all I have to suggest.
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~fraggln:iconfraggln: May 2, 2008, 6:07:07 AM
Very nice work. Actually, it doesn't look bad as is. Obviously though, you should draw the face of his stop watch, so you do know what it is. Other than that, as Loverzero said some type of texture or pattern for the grass and sky would finish it. Expiriment with different styles of grass and clouds on a seperate page for a while, I guess. Hope this helped.
~Luminaries:iconLuminaries: May 2, 2008, 9:00:56 AM
As they said, maybe texture grass. Clock face. If you're not going to color it, maybe draw clouds. However, if you're going to color, opt for a color-only solution. The problem is is that if you draw too much you'll lose all definition or separation of plane on the rabbits and tress. This isn't guaranteed, but it could very well happen, and that'd be terrible if such happened.

In short, don't dismiss negative space. It builds a lot more on pieces than people think, and you may not need to fill this as much as you think.

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~MilleniumRodan:iconMilleniumRodan: May 2, 2008, 10:44:19 AM
I'd suggest something with the empty spaces in the trees, either see through them like holes, or make faces or creatures or something. But I wouldn't be surprised if you already have something in plan.

Oh, maybe some buildings far off on the horizon.

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~MilleniumRodan:iconMilleniumRodan: May 2, 2008, 10:50:00 AM
Okay, not to double post, but I had some possible ideas for the background. I'm assuming this is Wonderland, so what if you did the Queen of Heart's castle, or some other Wonderland architecture.

As for the meadow, maybe some plants like clovers or even mushrooms.

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~DSHammoulton88:iconDSHammoulton88: May 2, 2008, 3:49:12 PM
YES! Why did i not think of mushrooms!? Perfect. Also, this isnt wonderland but it's close to the same concept. Thank you so much!
~DSHammoulton88:iconDSHammoulton88: May 2, 2008, 3:54:54 PM
Yeah, i agree with the color thing. I almost never color anything because im afraid that the color will clash with the details. I also agree about negative space. I want to fill some of it but not all of it. Thank you so much for the help! I really appreciate it!
~DSHammoulton88:iconDSHammoulton88: May 2, 2008, 4:10:11 PM
I also think it looks fine as is, i just get the feeling its not finished when ever i look at it. I do need to finished the clock face as you said and i think some clouds maybe. Thank you so much for the help, you have no idea.
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